July 17

When I went to turtorial with Jo this morning, I have already done the draft of my proposal as Jo asked me to do yesterday. She said it was great because it would be clear and easy to understand what my concept is and what stage I am and what can I improve better. I agreed with her because I have the draft so Jo can help me to recorrect some grammar mistake in my proposal and help me to analysis more for my bibliograph list. After the turtorial, I went to library to start my research of bibliography. Because my theme is 'Intimacy' ,I research about body connection,connection,kiss,sexual and wedding rings, etc. I have arranged in different areas of research which is good, but I think I can research more specific in jewellery.

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