Embossing Outcome- Commune Feedback

My Commune group have been meeting up each week, to discuss our projects, keep each other motivated and to get feedback on our progress .I thought my 4 embossed posters were possibly too ambiguous and hard to read but this is what the others thought...

"Isn't that the point?" -Cherry

"Our [Korean] letters look completely random to you, so I understand the ambiguity" -Minjung

"The letters are quite hard to see. The embossing isn't very deep" -Cherry

In response to this feedback, I'll keep the concept the same but perhaps the actual execution of the outcome could be improved- I could ink the posters, like in my "LISTEN" poster, to make the letters clearer and stand out? Or I could print the letters instead. Another idea I had was to print the four posters on acetate and layer them up so that you can see the entire phrase when you look through all four, but individually each slide has an apparently random collection of letters on. 

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